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发表于 2005-8-4 21:49

hotel california (the eagles)

  on a dark desert highway cool wind in my hair

  warm smell of colitas rising up through the air

  up ahead in the distance i saw a shimmering light

  my head grew heavy and my sight grew dim

  i had to stop for the night

  there she stood in the doorway;

  i heard the mission bell

  and i was thinking to myself

  ‘‘this could be heaven or this could be hell‘‘

  then she lit up a candle and she showed me the way

  there were voices down the corridor,

  i thought i heard them say...

  welcome to the hotel california

  such a lovely place

  such a lovely face

  plenty of room at the hotel california

  any time of year, you can find it here

  月黑大漠路迢迢,风高凛冽客思归,

  人倦眼乏昏欲睡,闻香忽见灯火碎,

  但见有女娉婷立,耳畔钟声如乐起,

  天堂地狱两相忘,浑然不似在人间,

  秉烛引路过画廊,人声嘈杂迎客至:

  加州客栈诚待客,虚位以侯游子回,

  her mind is tiffany- twisted, she got the mercedes bends

  she got a lot of pretty, pretty boys, that she calls friends

  how they dance in the courtyard, sweet summer sweat.

  some dance to remember, some dance to forget

  so i called up the captain,

  ‘‘please bring me my wine‘‘

  he said, ‘‘we haven‘‘t had that spirit here since nineteen sixty nine‘‘

  and still those voices are calling from far away,

  wake you up in the middle of the night

  just to hear them say...

  welcome to the hotel california

  such a lovely place

  such a lovely face

  they livin‘‘ it up at the hotel california

  what a nice surprise, bring your alibis

  衣香鬓影佳人意,玉郎终始为君来,

  放歌纵舞前廊院,香汗淋漓未尽欢:

  纵使笙歌能醉月,情未忘我怎忘情?

  便向校官索美酒,经年未备意阑珊,

  午夜梦回旧馆舍,声声呼唤充耳闻,

  倦鸟羁留深林久,此间乐哉不思飞,

  mirrors on the ceiling,

  the pink champagne on ice

  and she said ‘‘we are all just prisoners here, of our own device‘‘

  and in the master’s chambers,

  they gathered for the feast

  the stab it with their steely knives,

  but they just can‘‘t kill the beast

  last thing i remember, i was

  running for the door

  i had to find the passage back

  to the place i was before

  ‘‘relax,‘‘said the night man,

  we are programmed to receive.

  you can checkout any time you like,

  but you can never leave

  宝镜倒映烛影晃,寒冰装点酒色红,

  宾客齐至成盛筵,佳人美酒俱添光,

  轻启朱唇惊四座,投杯停箸不能食:

  钢刀银叉手中持,心魔犹在不能消,

  自我羁押成囚徒,吾辈颓然尚不知。

  闻言仓皇寻旧路,四顾茫茫无着处,

  明朝更向何处去?更者悠然言少歇:

  纵然我辈长别离,此生有命不能弃,

  前路漫漫归旧旅,生此回环无尽时。

花开花落会有时,不以物喜,不以己悲! Just like a star, burning ,burning myself,just lives for devouring the darkness that ever surrounded me!

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发表于 2005-8-4 21:57

先为自己顶一下~~~~~~

呵呵看来除了用英文诗歌形式翻译了李白《长干行》的美国现代时期诗人Ezra Pound 有如此造诣外,这位翻译“加洲旅馆”的仁兄也不错~~~~~~

花开花落会有时,不以物喜,不以己悲! Just like a star, burning ,burning myself,just lives for devouring the darkness that ever surrounded me!

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发表于 2005-8-4 23:02

As for 'Hotel California,’ I provide the following commonly heard theories:

(1) The Hotel California is a real hotel located in (pick one) Baja California on the coastal highway between Cabo San Lucas and La Paz, or else near Santa Barbara.

(2) The Hotel California is a mental hospital...

(3) It's about Satanism. Isn't everything?

(4) Hotel California is a metaphor for cocaine addiction. See 'you can check out any time you like but you can never leave.' This comes from the published comments of Glenn Frey, one of the coauthors.

(5) It’s about the pitfalls of living in southern California in the 1970s...

(6) My favor, posted to the Usenet by Thomas Dzubin of Vancouver, British Columbia: "There was this fireworks factory just three blocks from the Hotel California . . . and it blew up!"

Any translation without the original Mental Hospital sense is off the topic.

I suffer from chronic apathy, I was going to go see a docter about it, but I didn\'t really care.

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发表于 2005-8-4 23:20
or without the hidden meaning of drug use is off the topic too.  
I suffer from chronic apathy, I was going to go see a docter about it, but I didn\'t really care.

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发表于 2005-8-4 23:27

Here's another excerpt:

"Hotel California is an allegory about hedonism and greed in the 1970s in Southern California. At the time of its release, the Eagles were riding high in the music world, experiencing material success on a frightening level. Though they thoroughly enjoyed the money, drugs, and women fame threw their way, they were disquieted by it all and sought to pour that sense of unease into their music and to warn others about the dark underside of such adulation.

In a 1995 interview, Don Henley said the song 'sort of captured the zeitgeist of the time, which was a time of great excess in this country and in the music business in particular.' In another interview that same year, he referred to it as being about a 'loss of innocence.'

The album has as its underlying theme the corruption of impressionable rock stars by the decadent Los Angeles music industry. The celebrated title track presents California as a gilded prison the artist freely enters only to discover that he cannot later escape.

The real Hotel California is not a place; it is a metaphor for the west coast music industry and its effect on the talented but unworldly musicians who find themselves ensnared in its glittering web."


To emphasize underlying theme of the song in translation is vital.

I suffer from chronic apathy, I was going to go see a docter about it, but I didn\'t really care.

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发表于 2005-8-5 00:11

A little more about the song "Hotel California" and Camarillo State Mental Hospital "Pipes"

I have been to Camarillo State Mental Hospital location many times during the past several years. It is not very far from where I work, about 16 km?

This is one of the places rumored to have inspired the song "Hotel California" by the Eagles. Camarillo State Mental Hospital, which was closed during the President Reagan years, was then used for location filming. Now California State University took the building and named the school as Cal State University at Channel Island.

My friend, Bill, while on a location shoot, was working out of this building at the asylum just last May 2004. He's a set builder. While there, little things like the hammers, wrenches, etc. would disappear and then reappear in other rooms. Windows would shut, microwaves thrown on the floor, the walls would knock, and cold spots happened. They would hear children laughing, but no kids were there. A couple of the crew quit -- it was too close to the other side for them. My friend took this picture at the start of a workday about 5:00 AM and this is what he got. The crew nicknamed this ghost "Pipes" as it loved rapping on the pipes to the point where the walls would move. I guess this is a picture of "Pipes."


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发表于 2005-8-15 03:40
Thanks for your kindness, i gained  a lot from your artical.
I have spread my dreams under your feet, Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

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发表于 2005-8-15 12:30

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