哪位英语好，能帮我写封英文的信？

roxette

我在一外资公司上班，马上就要年度体检了，要检肝功和两对半。而且只有大陆员工要体检！所以我想给公司总裁发信，哪位肯帮忙写？不用写太长，只要表达几个意思就好：

1，体检结果是个人隐私，不应公开。

2，不能因为体检结果而解雇员工。

3，分布在世界各地的分公司都不会强制员工体检，不应该歧视中国大陆的员工。

希望他能正视这个问题。

Owl

Well, I have no language talent by any means , but I'd give it a try:

June 6, 2005

Your company

Your town,

Your province

Your country

Dear Sir or Madam:

I took the liberty of writing to you in connection with the company’s hiring and medical exam policies in China. I believe:

1. The physical examination result is an individual privacy and should not be publicized;

2. Hiring or firing standards should not be based on one’s physical examination;

3. The subsidiary branches of the company in the world never force the staffs, regardless of their locations, to take physical examination and China’s employees should not be the exceptionals;

The legislations and ordinances surrounding the Right to Privacy and Equal Employment Opportunity, says that individual should not be judged based on his/her age, race, disability, gender, sexual orientation, marital status, culture, or background.

Therefore I request that the company investigates the practices of China based firms and take appropriate enforcement action to stop these unfair and abusive practices. Thank you.

Sincerely,

Your name

SgBoy

I think that who wants others' help should try his best to do it first, instead of pushing all the responsibility on others' shoulder. Do you agree?

beat_it

good work!

Why should 'Right to Privacy and Equal Employment Opportunity' be in capitalized form of first letters? Does it refer to some particular meaning?

whoknows

I think it refers to a rule or regulation.

BTW, why not no response from the 1^st staris?

We’re expecting your version and the feedback from your company if you really appeal to your boss.

roxette

here i am.

折翅青鸟

For Chinese people ,the intention is clear so It is not useful to ask somebody to cancel the physical .You'd better find a specail way to pass the check.Goog luck, man.

beat_it

Is there response from the president of your company?

whoknows

Can you tell the result or any action taken?

roxette

I have send the mail to my manager , but no reply.