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发表于 2004-9-2 23:56

公司坚持以市场为导向，以客户为中心，建立了面向市场和客户的市场营销和客户服务平台
翻译成：
Our company's spirit--Leaded by market, centered by customer. We build direct selling facing market & customer and customer-service platform

这样翻译正确吗？谢谢

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发表于 2004-9-3 00:20

Maybe the following will be better.

Anyone want to improve it?

In line with the operating philosophy of **(company name) which takes the customers as the center and the market as the guidance, we have set up a marketing and customer service platform directly facing the market and customers.

助人者，天助之，自助者，天助之 Why is it that even those who are trying to DO GOOD Are subjected to PaIn, SIckneSS, TrAgEDy, and DEAth? Gain some INSIGHT into the answers by thinking about Our Own Mistakes The Ability to Choose Acts of Nature

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发表于 2004-9-3 03:48

Insisted on the marketr-oriented, customer-centered idea, our company has built a marketing and customer service platform directly facing the market and customers.

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-9-2 16:55:27编辑过]

秋随叶落加寒衣。梧桐泣，空伫立。帘帏飒飒，挥墨叙哀思。千种风情无人惜，花事了，更凄迷。聚散两难苦别离。梦痕字，伤心碧。恨满锦榻，此外不成诗。秋去冬来何太急，异时景，唯叹息。

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发表于 2004-9-3 05:16

Upstairs reminds me. How about this one:

In line with the operating philosophy of **(company name) which is customers and market oriented, we have set up a marketing and customer service platform directly facing the market and customers.

助人者，天助之，自助者，天助之 Why is it that even those who are trying to DO GOOD Are subjected to PaIn, SIckneSS, TrAgEDy, and DEAth? Gain some INSIGHT into the answers by thinking about Our Own Mistakes The Ability to Choose Acts of Nature

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发表于 2004-9-3 05:56

sorry made a mistake
should be marketed-oriented (or directed) customer-centered

秋随叶落加寒衣。梧桐泣，空伫立。帘帏飒飒，挥墨叙哀思。千种风情无人惜，花事了，更凄迷。聚散两难苦别离。梦痕字，伤心碧。恨满锦榻，此外不成诗。秋去冬来何太急，异时景，唯叹息。

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