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发表于 2004-3-15 07:10
people  laugh and people cry   
some give up and some aways try
some say Hi and somesay bye
   some may forget u but never I .
   
  ---------翻译成中文:
   鸟来鸟去山色里,人歌人哭水声中

呵呵.  再翻译成英文.

The Sound of Silence  

Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.
In restless dreams I walked alone
Narrow streets of cobblestone,
'Neath the halo of a street lamp,
I turned my collar to the cold and damp
When my eyes were stabbed by the flash of a neon light
That split the night
And touched the sound of silence.

And in the naked light I saw
Ten thousand people, maybe more.
People talking without speaking,
People hearing without listening,
People writing songs that voices never share
And no one dare
Disturb the sound of silence.

"Fools" said I, "You do not know
Silence like a cancer grows.
Hear my words that I might teach you,
Take my arms that I might reach you."
But my words like silent raindrops fell,
And echoed
In the wells of silence

And the people bowed and prayed
To the neon god they made.
And the sign flashed out its warning,
In the words that it was forming.
And the sign said, "The words of the prophets
are written on the subway walls
And tenement halls."
And whisper'd in the sounds of silence.

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发表于 2004-3-15 10:00
哟呵呵,我可就是睁眼瞎了。
大哥,翻成中文啊!
想用眼光洗白乌鸦, 呵呵,我就是现代的唐诘诃德!!

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发表于 2004-3-15 11:33
虽然句子很简单,可我也不敢乱翻
看哥哥的

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发表于 2004-3-15 17:45
ppl laugh ppl cry
ppl live ppl die
when to give up when to try
when to say hi when to bye
brother let me tell you why
memory always be there shine.
有所不为,而后可以有为

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发表于 2004-4-30 07:16
有的人快乐,有的人悲伤.
有的人学会了放弃,有的人仍旧执著.
有的人来了,有的人走了.
其实我可以用其他人替代你的存在,但我永远不会.

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发表于 2004-4-30 07:30
对了,翻译的不对的地方请提出来

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发表于 2004-8-14 01:51
哪位能告诉我这英文的出处吗?多谢了~~~

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发表于 2004-8-30 12:47
我的翻译:
  
有人哭有人笑;
有人放弃有人百折不挠;
有人说再见时有人说你好;
有人将不再记起你而我永远不会把你忘掉。

英文原版是押韵的
所以我觉得译文最好也押韵但又要忠实原文
呵呵
翻译的不好大家别见怪~~
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