借个地盘，每天一练习写作~，~战友们多指导啊~我是菜鸟，~

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I am  proud of my mistake in English  if you tell me the right answer!!!~,~

I am a green hand ,I think  it better to copy an artilcle by heart on the first day,so it is my article title:      an animal at large.
pumas are large ,cat-like animals which are found in America.when the reports came into London Zoo that a wild puma had been spotted forty-five miles south of London,they were not taken seriously,however ,as the evidence began to accumulate ,the experts from the zoo felt oblige to investigate,the descriptions gave by people who claim to have seen the puma were extraordinarily similar.
The hunt for the puma began in a small village where a woman picking blackberries saw "a large cat"only five yards aways from her,It immediatally ran away when she saw it .experts have confirned that a puma will never attack human being unless it is
cornered.
do you want to  know if the large cat is a puma? where do it from?~,~

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on the evening of February third, I  will   write on my  article.
firstly,I would like to tell you a story .it is very amusing!
a couple walking in a park noticed a man and woman sitting on a benth , passionately kissing , the wife said to her husband,"why don't you do that?" the husband answered,"I want to do so" the wife was very excited  untill her husband said "but I ever don't know her".............................

awei

以下是引用燕归来在2004-2-2 21:28:25的发言：
iIwillbeproudofmymistakemadeinEnglishifyoutellmetherightanswer!!!~,~

Iamagreenhand,Ithinkitbettertocopyanartilclebyheartonthefirstday,soitismyarticletitle:ananimalatlarge.
pumasarelarge,cat-likeanimalswhicharefoundinAmerica.whenthereportscameintoLondonZoothatawildpumahadbeenspottedforty-fivemilesawaysouthofLondon,theywerenottakenseriously,however,astheevidencebegantoaccumulate,theexpertsfromthezoofeltobligetoinvestigate,thedescriptionsgavebypeoplewhoclaimtohaveseenthepumawereextraordinarilysimilar.
Thehuntforthepumabeganinasmallvillagewhereawomanpickingblackberriessaw"alargecat"onlyfiveyardsawaysfromher,Itimmediatallyranawaywhenshesawit.expertshaveconfirnedthatapumawillneverattackhumanbeingunlessitis
cornered.
doyouwanttoknowifthelargecatisapuma?wheredoitfrom?~,~

do-->does...
why copy new concept english 4? nice try but better have your own article

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-2-4 8:33:26编辑过]

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~,~it is the first lesson of the New Concept Englsih 3th,thank you for your advise!
because I am begining to learn writing,so I think that it is right to copy excellent article by heart.
last night,there was something wrong with my computer,so I shall writer two article today!
the following story is interesting,too.
A man was hit by a car in a street,fortunately,he was brought to the hospital,his wife who was standing up by the bed,she looked very setup,said to doctor:"I think that he must be ill very much","I''''m afraid that he is dead"replied the doctor.
hearing that,the man moved his hand and said"I am not dead,I am still alive"
but his wife got very angrily,shouted to him,"shut up, the doctor always know   better than you"
~,~

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-2-5 18:33:01编辑过]

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oh,I have not introduced myself yet. I am a girl from ZheJang where is very beautiful city,do you know it much? There is a West Lake in HangZong,maybe you have already visited it,it must gave you a good enjoyment,didn''''''''''''''''t it?however,I only went to HangZong three times though I am not far away. Beause I do not like sitting in a bus, I have missed a lot of chance to visit other cities. I think that it is my distiny to  stay home in most of my life.
however, recently I find it helpful to study English. what is more,English is interesting to me. I  am  nearly in love with him.Don''''''''''''''''t laugh at me,for English is the most beautiful language to me,I am willing to read it everyday.~~~~~~~
that is all.
dear friends ,could you tell me what you think of English?

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-2-9 8:55:34编辑过]

flyingsz1983

i think for the very beginning, it's better to use simple words to at least let other ppl to know what u r trying to say! Usually girls have advantage in oral. So from my part, i think u can just start with simple words.
As language is a tool of communication! Isn't it?

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~，~thank you  for your reading,you said that it is better to use simple words to write an article because it is helpful to communicate,I agree with it.but I am exercising writing.so I always ask me to use some different words. it is a real bad news that you do not understand my articles,it made me sad.
my dear,it is so terrible to hear that news,dear friends,tell me it is really????????

flyingsz1983

I think that it is my desitiny to  stay home in most of my life.
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This one i dun understand. I think maybe you typed wrongly. I suggest you to install something like Powerword in yr computer. It wil b helpful for beginner. As you know, u wanna try some new words, but sometimes u may not able to spell correctly.
For the rest, i think i can understand all la.
Btw, r u now University or stil high school? If still high school, then yr level should be ok la.
I am sure you can get 12 point out of 15 in yr english test. But for university student, i think u stil need to improve la. Actually i am also very poor-writing. Remember during english bridging course, i always get B- for this. Same now, while doing projects, my lab reports  and communication projects never get A. Sigh~~~~~~~~~~~
So study together la~

Can i ask u which part of Zhejiang are you from? I am also from zhejiang la. Didn't notice this b4.

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~，~the sentence must be wrong,the word "destiny"spelled wrong,moreover,I am not sure the grammar is right~~~~I did only want to say"这是我的命运to一生中大多数时间呆在家里" I live in JINGHUA Dong Yang,it is a small city near Yi Wu,I have not been a student for many years,but I find it interesed to me to learn English ,so I brought the New Concept English to study ,~<~ and you??????? I want to pass PET3,it is difficult to me now,so I must study and study!

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-2-9 8:57:00编辑过]

flyingsz1983

so ga.
i think PET 3 should be easy. I can get more than 90 points during high school for this test.
i am now an oversea student. But here many ppl can speak chinese, i only need to use english in campus. That's why my english is stil so poor now!
I am from Taizhou. u should know it, right?