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作者: ssdlh    时间: 2009-5-17 11:19     标题: Gone with the winds

A friend of mine said,

Gone were the days when we were young and pure.
Gone were the days when we were in school days.
Fate drifts us apart on different ways.
don't say sorry
as gone were the days
don't say pity
for the one ruined those beautiful days and promise.

I can understand him deeply
Gone were the days when we have noting to think about
Gone were the days when there is no gap between us
Gone were the days when  we have sweet dreams
Gone were the days when we are far away fron reality

Maybe i will still say pity to something. To many things, we have no choice but accept.
It is all wriiten. I can not anticipate what will happen in the future even tommorrow. Everything can be changed overnight, i have encountered those  things for many times. When i was in bed thinking about what would happen, when i woke up everything is changed. Bad news, out of my expection, were big jokes playing on me.

All the things, whether it is sweet or sad, will be romoved from our memory with the time flowing.
Nothing will leave finally. We should say ," let it go. It is uncessary to imposed."
Keep silent, do the things what we should do. Try my best to be better, go ahead, step by step
作者: 走遍四方    时间: 2009-5-18 14:00

Sofa. have a break and a nice tea.
作者: 走遍四方    时间: 2009-5-18 14:05

then, rearm yourself and shape your future.
作者: ssdlh    时间: 2009-5-18 19:01     标题: 回复 3# 的帖子

actually , i worte it in the end of March,  and just as i   said  'When i was in bed thinking about what would happen, when i woke up everything is changed. ' I feel sad, and remind this article these days. And the person will not read this article ever and forever.
作者: 天地绘    时间: 2009-5-18 19:13

What you wrote here is not as perfect as you did in the other date, too many wording mistakes and you need to read it and rectify them before you forward them to the BBS, got it?

But anyway, it is meaningful and I am sure  people got the deeply impression after they read it! Don't give up!
作者: ssdlh    时间: 2009-5-18 19:40     标题: 回复 5# 的帖子

Thank you for ur advice




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