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标题: Love Is A Bird [打印本页]

作者: Mr.Y 时间: 2012-5-8 12:58 标题: Love Is A Bird

本帖最后由 Mr.Y 于 2012-5-8 12:59 编辑

Love is a bird
that never comes to my world

She has beautiful feather
which makes me so admire

I wanna get closer and share my happiness with her

But swirling in the air, she goes further
disappear in my world
http://box.baidu.com/widget/flash/mbsong.swf?name=%E8%88%92%E4%BC%AF%E7%89%B9%E5%B0%8F%E5%A4%9C%E6%9B%B2&artist=%E9%92%A2%E7%90%B4%E6%9B%B2

作者: george1st 时间: 2012-5-8 22:19

it's a good poem.

作者: Mr.Y 时间: 2012-5-15 22:11

本帖最后由 Mr.Y 于 2012-5-15 22:11 编辑

回复 george1st 的帖子

thanks

, but there may be some grammar mistakes.

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