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发表于 2009-4-5 21:06
幸福最近怎么样啦了,好久没有更新自己最新动态了啊~~~

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发表于 2009-4-15 22:21
i was studing english always.i want back to school.
today when i was read words,i have remenber a joke.before a long time ,when i was a student in the university .at that night each of my classmates was sleeping,one of them want go wc we called A.and anther called B.
    when A get up and at the door.
    B  turn up and said:bat!
    A :where?
    B:behind the door
    A lookover the door and answered :nothing!
    when A look at B,B was going on sleeping~

不知道看懂没,谁英语好帮忙检查一下!有没有什么错误。感觉上应该是有,然后给个评价,谢谢咯!英语处于初级水平,别见笑啊!我在good good study ,day day up~~~~
男人的背该背负一身重担也能够高飞;男人的腿该走遍千山万水从不会说累。

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发表于 2009-4-15 22:37
呵呵,很好啊,感觉能看懂,就是太CHINESE ENGLISH了。

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发表于 2009-4-15 22:48
I studies english recently cause I want back to school.
Today,when I was learning the words,I recalled a funny story happened in my university time.
It happened between two of my roommates in night.I call them A and B.
A get up and went to pee.
B:Bat!
A : Where?(looked through all the room)
B......(Already fall to sleep)

期待高手修改。

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发表于 2009-4-18 23:03
i was studing english always.(I have been studying English recently.)i want back to school.(I want to go back to school.)
today when i was read words,(when i was reading..), i have remenber a joke before a long time ,(i remember a joke), when i was a student in the university .at that night each of my classmates was(my roommates were) sleeping,one of them want go wc (one of them wanted to go to wc)we called(hime) A.and anther(another) was called B.
    when A get(got) up and (went to) the door.
    B  turn (got) up and said:bat!
    A :where?
    B:behind the door
    A look(looked) over the door and answered :nothing!
    when A look(looked) at B,B was going on sleeping~

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发表于 2009-4-19 20:59
偶是个不合格的学生


好心态,很重要

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发表于 2009-4-19 21:15
时态错误,语法也有问题,

You need to try more effort as you did for the love to improve your English skill,  come on buddy!

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发表于 2009-4-19 21:40
哈哈,我也是不合格的学生诶~~~就这水平大概还赶不上高中生吧,晕死了~~不过没关系,俺会努力学习滴~
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发表于 2009-4-20 10:27
英语全还给老师了......
我不丑,也不准备温柔。

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发表于 2009-4-20 20:09
呵呵,不是还给人家了,是压根就没得到,呵呵!比较懒一直英语学的都不好!
男人的背该背负一身重担也能够高飞;男人的腿该走遍千山万水从不会说累。
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