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发表于 2006-7-16 12:34

本人下星期三要去德州仪器(中国有限公司)面试可是蹩脚的英语口语难道了我,烦请高手帮我翻译一下我的简历。

如下:本人三年前毕业于XX大学,专业是机电一体化,毕业后来到一家台湾制造厂做工艺工程师,主要负责生产线良率和效率的提升;本人能够熟练的使用6SIGMA手法对生产线品质进行改善,掌握工艺工程师技能,制作机种履历,制作SOP,和一些IE手法对生产线效率进行提升。

           基于对外企的喜爱和对工艺工程师的擅长,以及我自身的客观条件和贵公司的要求,我相信贵公司能给我提供施展才能的另一片天空,而且我也相信我的努力能让贵公司的事业更上一层楼

     请版主以及英语高手帮我翻译一下,不胜感激

谢谢

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发表于 2006-7-17 00:53

呵呵楼主同志,斑竹挺忙的,这个就让我来代劳翻译一下吧。我翻得很口语的了,非常方便楼主记忆。

I was graduated from xx university three yeras ago, major in Mechatronics Technology & Application. And then I became a technic engineer of a Taiwan factory, mainly processing the improvement of 良率(不好意思,这个术语中文我都不明白) and  efficiency of product line.

I am proficient in improving the qualities of product line by the way of 6SIGMA. I am also proficient in technic engineer skills, making machine record, making SOP and some ways of improving the efficiency of product line by IE.

Due to my favor to foreign enterprises, my proficient skills in technic engineer, my external conditions and the requirement of yours, I believe that you will give me a chance to work for your company and I also believe that I can handle the job well and I will do everything in my power to make the company goes further.

DEVOURING THE DARKNESS EVER SURROUNDED ME!

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发表于 2006-7-17 10:50

thank you, Intoxication!

i think simple and fluent english is enough when you are in the interview with the manager, but in the resume, formal english is requried.

BTW, too many thanks i need to say to Intoxication in helping me in other aspects. when i am in difficult situations, he always offers me great supports.

Welcome to English Forum, anything in English

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发表于 2006-7-18 00:01

我把Intoxication的翻译做了一些修改,楼主一起参考一下吧!

I graduated from xx university three years ago, majored in mechanotronics. After graduation, I went to a Taiwanese factory served as a technician, mainly charging the choiceness of the product line and the improvement of the efficiency.

I am proficient in improving the qualities of product line by the way of 6SIGMA, I have good engineer skills, and I can make machine record(我不知道什么叫机种履历), also SOP. Besides I have mastered the skills of improving the efficiency of product line by some IE means.

Due to my favor to foreign enterprises, my proficient skills in technic engineer, my personal conditions and the requirement of yours, I believe that you will give me a chance to work for your company and I also believe that I can handle the job well and I will do everything in my power to make the company goes further.

Sow a seed and the earth will yield a flower. Dream your dream to the sky and it will bring you your beloved. 播下一颗种子 ,大地将为你生长出鲜花。向天空许下一个心愿,天空会把你心爱的人带到你面前。

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发表于 2006-7-18 01:45

谢谢三位老师

谢谢了

战友真好

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发表于 2006-7-18 08:06
呵呵,我可不敢做老师,我翻译还主要借助金山词霸.[em02]
Sow a seed and the earth will yield a flower. Dream your dream to the sky and it will bring you your beloved. 播下一颗种子 ,大地将为你生长出鲜花。向天空许下一个心愿,天空会把你心爱的人带到你面前。
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