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发表于 2005-1-20 06:47
处女作发表,祝贺一番先

有感于论坛一位MM发表的真人发音

美好的诗篇加上甜美的声音,都觉得蛮感动的

觉得文字挺有趣的

此处提供该MM佳作的链接http://www.hbvhbv.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=413891

为表达佩服赞赏之意,正好身边有一好用的翻译机

折腾了近半天,自感觉有点样子了

现在发表,大家同享其中乐趣,

由于外语蛮差的,多亏了有现成的软件,

其中不妥之出,肯定蛮多的,现仇了:

我在QQ上偷偷地望着你

Staring at you in QQ like a thief

(To all the mm in my QQ, especially to mm still be single)

Staring at you in QQ like a thief, no words. Only staring at you like a thief.

No matter in twinkling night or running morning, I just staring at you in QQ like a thief With none desire, just continuously staring at you like a thief.

Saring at you when you logging in or logging off, don’t know how to do.

feeling like a fool, but still willing to staring at you with crazy mind. somehow like god’s idea, with uncontrollable heart

so confused why one like you touch my heart so deep

anxious to tell you all the truth of me ,from the early day. but couldn’t do that, afraid of my rude driving you away! from the early day ,so hungry to appear beside you ,with most intentionally but stop, deeply worried my plain would draw on your laugh. from the early day, so anxious to let you feel my existence ,the really me. but afraid of your cold would frozen my weakly heart So no choice but staring at you in QQ like a thief

staring at you clearly & easily by QQ,that amazing feeling warming me in those froze days, I got to know your heart. laugh with your laugh,

cry with your cry,

happy with your happy,

lonely with your lonely,

Believe it or not , I come to know your world by those tiny cartoon faces

some days I saw warmth & gentleness rushing out your heart.

some days spring breeze your face, you have your day’s. some time I can feel your wildly ambition & great ideas. also your plain like water’s sad & worry

There are no rock & sea between our swear, nothing about romance.

No honey sweet words,

Time cleaning all the corners, life interleaving and net in mad unordered, you would never know in this dirty world there had ever been one, using most possible time, staring at you like a thief with deeply affectionateness……

一切皆有可能! 一扇门关闭的同时别忘了另一扇门正在打开! 条条马路通罗马!

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发表于 2005-8-9 05:35
Until today, I saw this post[em06][em05]
哪个九十七岁死,奈何桥上等三年。

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发表于 2005-8-10 09:00
大眼睛的
众鸟高飞尽,孤云独去闲.相看两不厌,只有敬亭山。

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发表于 2005-8-12 07:29
which  girl?

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发表于 2005-8-20 10:26

我在QQ上偷偷地望着你

Staring at you in QQ slinkingly

(To all the mm in my QQ, especially to mm still be single)

Staring at you in QQ slinkingly, but I did not chat with you.

我在QQ上偷偷地望着你,我没有找你说话,
Only staring at you slinkingly.

只是偷偷地望着你,
No matter on a twinkling nights or a hurried mornings,

无论是在星星闪烁的夜晚,还是在车水马龙的早晨
I just staring at you in QQ slinkingly and silently ,

我就在QQ上这么的望着你
With no other desire, just continuously staring at you with a peaceful heart.

我没有别的念头,只是想一直不舍的
静静地望着你
Watching you logging in or logging off, I don’t know what shall I do.

我望着你上线、离线,我不知道我应该做点什么

Feeling like a fool, but I still willing to stare at you with a mooning heart.

我也知道自己很傻,但仍然愿意痴痴地望着你
Somehow I am very silly, unreasonable, just have an uncontrollable heart

有点莫名其妙有点情不自禁有点稀里糊涂
Somewhat confused why someone like you touches my heart so deep

我不明白这样的一个你为何如此让我心动,
From a long time, I am anxious to tell you all my true words

一直以来,我渴望着把我必须跟你说的最为真实的话告诉你,
But I could not to do, for being afraid of my rudeness driving you away!

可是我不敢,我怕你会责怪我的鲁莽;

From a long time , I am eager to meet you ,not intentionally

一直以来,我渴望着在你身边出现,最不经意的,

But I stopped myself for times, worrying my triviality would draw on your laugh.

可是我不敢,我怕你会嘲笑我的平凡;
From a long time, so anxious to let you feel my existence ,the real me.

一直以来,我渴望着能让你感觉到我的存在,最真真切切的
But afraid of your indifference would frozen my warm heart

可是我不敢,我怕会遭遇你的漠视
So I have the only choice , staring at you in QQ slinkingly

所以我选择,依然只是在QQ上偷偷地望着你。
There I can staring at you clearly with deliberation in QQ,

通过QQ,我可以清清楚楚从从容容地望着你

That amazing feeling warming me in those days, I get to know what your mood is.

那种感觉让我好舒服好温暖,我可以知道你现在的心情

Smile, when your smile,
Weep , when your weep,

你笑,我陪你一起笑,你哭,我陪你一起哭

The day you happy is also my happy day,
The day you lonely , I also feel lonely,

你高兴的日子我同样高兴,你无聊的日子我也一样的无聊

Can you believe it , I come to know you from such a tiny cartoon image,

你相信吗?透过那个小小的卡通头像,我可以读懂你的世界

Sometimes, I feel warmth and gentleness running from your heart.

有时候,我可以看到你心中涌出的温暖和亲切;

Sometimes, I know you are having a free and easy life;

有时候,我可以猜想你如沐春风的潇洒和得意;
Sometimes, I could feel your wild ambition and great ideas,

有时候,我体会到你踌躇满志的理想和志气;
And also your light blues.

有时候,我可以感知到你清清淡淡的忧郁和愁闷。

Between us, not a solemn pledge of love, not any romance.

你我之间,没有任何山盟海誓,没有点滴辉煌浪漫

No honey sweet words,
Time flies, life changes fast, falling across or parting with others ; on the unordered internet,

没有丝毫甜言蜜语。时间匆匆来去,生命觥筹交错,网路纷繁凌乱

You may never know in this world there was a girl, spending most of her time, staring at you slinkingly,with deeply affectionateness……

你可能永远都不会知道,在这个世界上,曾经有一个人,
用足了她所有可能的时间偷望你,深情地望着你。。。。。。

endnotes:

i have revised the poem , together with Xiang ZI, and I am glad that everyone can come here to enjoy with us, making your comments.

Sow a seed and the earth will yield a flower. Dream your dream to the sky and it will bring you your beloved. 播下一颗种子 ,大地将为你生长出鲜花。向天空许下一个心愿,天空会把你心爱的人带到你面前。

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发表于 2005-8-22 22:53

英语大部分忘记了

这回好好补习

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发表于 2005-8-23 01:27
The translation is so beautiful....[em26]
永远面对现实,进取多于防卫。

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发表于 2005-8-23 03:03

真的翻得很好,相形之下,我那朗诵都有点见拙了

今天翻了出来,再温习一下

[mp=360,70]http://song2.wo99.com/userdir15421/121990/1103682315134143.wma[/mp]

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-8-29 14:00:53编辑过]

走在一起,是缘份,一起在走,是幸福........

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发表于 2005-8-23 03:12

Big eyes is a sweet girl

beautiful~~~~~

Welcome to English Forum, anything in English

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发表于 2005-8-23 06:57
fond of  her sweet voice[em05]
哪个九十七岁死,奈何桥上等三年。
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